CM Magazine Review - Mud Girl
Reviewed by: Michelle Superle
Excerpt: If she lies really still-doesn't make a move to get up-she can almost hear the sound of that laughter. No, it's the river, carrying mud from one place to the next. The sight of her scarf takes Abi by surprise. It seems like a dream, the day before. Then she remembers the waiting, the phone not ringing. What's a promise, anyway? Abi takes up where she left off with the needle and yarn, and leaves bed only when a hunger headache threatens. . . Cereal, and back to the scarf. She can feel the sun warming the east side of the house, rising over the roof. Dad gets up, dumps cereal into a bowl, looks vaguely for the milk 'Fridge,' Abi reminds him. Click, click, click, go the needles. She likes the sound. She suddenly realizes the TV's off. 'Hey, what's with the . . .'she starts to say, but then shuts up. Why remind him? He sits at the table. Still seems to be looking for something or somebody', Dad. 'Abi speaks as if he's a songbird just landed on the windowsill. 'Dad, eat.' He does, tentatively. They sit, almost like any other daughter and father, eating breakfast. 'Did you sleep well?' she asks. It's supposed to be the question the parent asks the teenager, and it's supposed to annoy the teenager 'Huh?' he asks. 'Oh. Yeah.' Does he remember what I just said?'
Alison Acheson's newest novel for teens is a work of brilliance, most closely resembling the work of Canadian YA icon Martha Brooks, yet with an understated genius all its own. In Mud Girl, protagonist Aba Zytka Jones-Abi-spends her sixteenth summer contemplating life's biggest questions. Abi lives in a vividly rendered shack-like house perched on the banks of the Fraser River in Delta, British Columbia. The building's dilapidation and precarious hold on the bank mirrors her father's tenuous hold on his mental health, his depression began after Abi's mother left the previous year, and it leaves Abi a virtual orphan.
During the school year, she traversed a narrow, subsistent existence, but this summer she actively seeks out meaningful relationships and a job, although she still faces the same emptiness in her home life. Abi asks herself a lot of questions about her mother's decision to leave the family, but she doesn't come up with many answers. Her searching, however, enables the emotionally emaciated girl to make productive connections with several new people who come into her life. Each quirky and delightfully believable, the secondary characters in Mud Girl add an impressive depth to the novel. A
bi finds surrogate relatives (father and mother? uncle and aunt?) in Horace the kindly bus driver and 'Ernestine,' the Big Sister volunteer. Amanda, a more helpful and responsive 'big sister' than Ernestine, gives Abi a job and some valuable perspective on life and relationships, both familial and romantic. Jude, the lost and self-centered boy who becomes Abi's boyfriend, is her foil, and their faltering romance allows Abi to learn to trust her own judgment and intuition. Jude's mother, Lily, and his son, Dyl, also enable Abi to grow, and she repays the chance they give her a thousandfold.
By the end of the novel, Abi has grown from a confused, frightened child to a much more decisive young woman who is aware of the realities of both her limitations and power. Every element of Mud Girl is just right. The characters are round and realistic, the plot compels page-turning, the setting symbolically mirrors the theme, and the resolution is satisfying. Particularly impressive is Acheson's use of language. Every sentence is understated yet filled with a full depth of meaning while the diction is gratifying for its warm poetic rhythm. Mud Girl's best quality, though, is its tone. Acheson manages to strike the almost impossible balance between hope for Abi's future and the true direness of her current situation. That this is done without the least hint of heavy handed didacticism is even more striking.
In a genre crowded with depressing mediocrity, Acheson has defied the norm by producing a work of high artistic quality that is also fully accessible to young adult readers. It is a pleasure not to be burdened with another cookie cutter slick teen throwaway story. Mud Girl is a compelling novel-easily the best YA book of the year. It deserves to be in the hands of every teenager in Canada. Highly Recommended****/4/ Michelle Superle teaches Children's Literature and Composition at the University College of the Fraser Valley.